Periwinkle Murder - Comments

  • auden

    auden (650)

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    This was amazing and so very unique! I have yet to read a drabble about murder and now I finally have. And I’ve got to say that it was very interesting. Like how you talk about covering up the blood splatter with such a pretty color blue.

    And it is true that periwinkle blue is a calming color. Who would ever suspect you.

    I like that I’m left wondering about this. What kind of person is the narrator? Who did they murder? What did the person do to make the narrator kill them?

    You know? I like that. This flowed very nicely and it was easy to read.

    You deserve a high five!
    August 29th, 2010 at 09:20pm
  • hiyaitsjackie

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    i really like how you used the color in an original way. i never would have thought of that. its so true that we all have something to hide and we all hide them in different ways. good job. ill PM your score.
    July 30th, 2010 at 07:50am