Murder Mouse - Comments

You have no idea how much im digging the banner XD

This is pretty chill story man. I like it

Oh my lord, this is the most amazing story ever! I was smiling the entire friggin' time I read this. It's absolutely genius, and I adored getting a rather different perspective. How you thought of this I have no idea, but bravo!
The mauling of the guy in chapter two was priceless! OH my lord, I laughed until I cried. xD I hope that was kind of the reaction you were going for.
And I feel so, so bad for that little mouse, being in love with Annie but alas, he's a mouse. :(
I'm subscribing to this! :D

That picture is the best thing I've ever seen.
I really do like this though.
It's very different, and very interesting.
Fantastic.

That little guy means some serious buisness. D:
He's like, mauling that guy in Chapter Two.
She screamed. I knew I had to kill him.
(Not the exact quote, aha) ^ But that's like Dayum. D:

Aha, I still love this as always. <3 (:
The details are pretty interesting and in a way, it's fun trying to see things in this little guys point of view.In all honesty, sometimes while I'm reading, I forget he's not human. x) While he was licking her foot,I sat there, "Hmm. That's a bit strange for a person to do."

I still love this cutie-pie story. :)

I scowled at him. "Wink, you disgust me. You fucking repulsive creature. Get the hell out of my room and get me some more damn cheese!"
This made me laugh. ^_^ Really interesting point of view. I liked it. :) Very creative and original. Kepp it up!

this is the most interesting idea I have come across. I have never, other than redwall, come across a story which involves a mouse and a killer mouse at that. I love Lars, he may be a killer but he is a gallant one.

Just, genious. Utter genious.

What else can I really say about it?
It's really well written and well, yeah. I freaking love it. xD

Haha, this is so cute, and so different.
I love how it's in the point of view of a mouse. :]

I still love it XD
So unique.
Maybe I should make a horse story on here (fail, fool, fail)

I think I fell in love with before I even began reading, aha.
That picture. x)

The only thing I didn't like was how the beginning was somewhat confusing.
After I continued, that cleared up though. (:

This idea is seriously unique and you have a somewhat catchy writing
style. :)

Amazing Job.
<3

I'll start by saying your layout, made me giggle on the inside. You know that feeling when something is so ludicrously funny and you can't let anyone know you're laughing at it? Yeah, that was me.

Although it creeped me out a little at first, I most certainly cannot argue with its originality. You deserve a medal to be frank. I love the light humor that's brought along by his absolute conviction that he's in love with her; like I said, ludicrous.

Ludicrous brilliance.

I was so confused at first. xD
It took me a minute to realize it was from a mouse's point of view... I don't know, I'm really tired and loopy.
I liked it, though. :3 It was really cute.

This seems so interesting and cute x] Reminds me of The Tale of Despereaux a bit. So cute! I'm subbing <3

Aww, I like this. I've never read anything like this, so this is definetly a nice refreshment. :) Sweet job.

This is so amazingly amzing! i love how it's about a mouse. Very original. <3 Please update soon!

(P.S: I couldn't stop laughing when I saw the banner! XD)

I think this is one of the most original things I've read.

I love the banner. Hilarious. xD

Ah, that was great.

Nice job <3

MOUSE!

Loved the picture XD

Nagi wanna read more. AND GEMME SOME MORE DAMN CHEESE!

*cough*

Nagi'll subscribe.

OMIGOSH that layout picture made me almost die laughing. xD

This was great. Really weird, but that makes me want to see where it goes.

I'll subscribe. (:

<3

Damn I double posted. I'm sorry for bringing your hopes up with my multiple fails. >_<

This is so original! I loved the summary. Is it wrong that I giggle a bit? I think so. I love stories like these. <3 I never knew mice could swear haha. I was picturing him saying "Make me a sandwhich!" XD Such a cute story! I love it. :3