Strangle - Comments

this was really amazing and had great description right here:
His throbbing cerulean veins can be seen through his fair skin and I don't know why I ever thought he was handsome. His eyes are two unlovely shades of green and his hair is always greasy and he smells like sewer water and sour milk because we can't always afford plumbing. Ross is an animal and he makes me afraid.

The layout is gorgeous. I love that picture.

I really like your writing style. It almost has a simple type of feel to it which I like.
Your descriptions are lovely and the emotion was perfect.

Awesome job :D

Drabble for drabble

Just so you know this really isn't considered a drabble.
A drabble is two hundred words or less. This is way more than that so I would say this is a one shot.

But nonetheless, I chose to comment on it.

Ahem.

The layout is beautiful.
That photo is exquisite.

The content was excellent. the emotion was at the perfect level.
As well as your descriptions and just the story in general.
Very well done.