Always and Inevitably Yours - Comments

Poor Sean!! I wan't to comfort him! Update! Update!!

Dude. You got a way with words.
This made my friend cry. :(
And she is very emotional.
BUT ALL IN ALL - GREAT FxCKING JOB! :)

It was sad, but I think you put it together beautifully.
Especially with the descriptions, it made the emotion and purpose stronger,
good job.(:

“Hello, my name is Sean Babcock and I am Audrey’s husband by common law. “ He began

It's not a period at the end. You should put a comma and the 'H' shouldn't be capitalized,
Overall decent and good. But I'm not sure why dialogue was in kursive? It disrupted the flow a bit for me to be honest.
Otherwise good. :)

Aw, this was really sad and sweet.
You did a really good job.
You went in to detail with things which made it even better.

Aw. I teared up a little bit.
Your descriptions were great, and it was very deep.
Great job! (:

Interesting. I teared up a bit; not going to lie. You're a pretty fair writer. :) Keep up the good work!

Writing this while reading.

The title
It's cool. Not amazing. If I just stumbled by this on the stories main page, I probably wouldn't read it, though.

The layout
Blaand. It isn't anything special, really, but it isn't the worst, I suppose. At least I can read the text.

The description
Love is stronger than death even though it can't stop death from happening, but no matter how hard death tries it can't separate people from love. That doesn't flow well, to me. I feel like there should be a period after happening.

Chapter one
The Ripples happily traveling along the lakes edge. The cloudless sky was mimicking the blue of the water. The Ripples really shouldn't be capitalized.
“Would anyone like to say a few words?” I have no idea why he's speaking in italics.

But over all, this was pretty good.

alrighty sooo, this was so totally awesome! I loved how descriptive you were!

A bird or two could be heard in the distance chirping sweetly to the morning air. That line stood out to me; god only knows why.
The fact that he ran to alcohol after she died upset me. I was like, NO.
It was sad. The imagery was excellent, though. <3
No- it was worse than sad. That could send me spiraling into depression. O.o

D'aww, this is touching.
I loved the relationship between Sean and his mother, and how he pushed her away in his darkest of times. I thought that was pretty original, expecially since she seemed to be completely oblivious to his seething.

He held back the urge to push her arms away and scream to the high heavens for her to not touch him. Oh, how I've felt like this so many times before...

He hated the way she was always there for him. That was a good line, too. :]

Oh, and there are a few, slight grammatical errors, here and there. A quick revising wouldn't hurt.
All in all, glorious work.

Awh! This is so sad. :(
Really deep and I just loved it.
:(
<3

::sadface::

I love your wording and how strong it is, it can make many people cry. Hahaha. It's a great story for a good read.

:D

Aweh. D: This made me tear up. You have a way words and I'm not just saying that. I really love that quote. "Death ends a life not a relationship." That little speech he made at the end made me tear up even more. I couldn't find any errors. I was too caught up in the story. Great writing. <3

Whoa. Your descriptions are amazing.
This was, just, whoa. I could really feel the sadness.
It was just so sad.
Great job, man. :)

D:
Dude, intense! MAde me want to cry. Dx
I love this, though. For reals. You are great at descriptions.

Yay comment virginity stole darling!
This is amazing, love is something I'm not into but I just hearted this!!