Broken Hearts and Torn up Letters - Comments

I can't read it because of the layout? what I can read seems pretty good though...

I Love The Story...Good Job :D

by the way chapter four is matt s point of view so yeah that should make more sense

I'm liking the plot so far, but I really think it needs some grammar and spellchecking done. Not to sound too harsh :S I just meant that, if you want more people to read, your work should be as perfect as possible - all i'm saying is this needs a little work :)