The Orange Letter - Comments

alexander bernadotte (125)

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I also liked the first paragraph and the references were wonderful. I love this line the best: The deep orange of the flames engulfed the old stump as I stood there and laughed.
Like Padfoot.Moony.Prongs said, I loved that you used the color to show a powerful emotion (:
Lovely job! <3

August 9th, 2010 at 09:39pm

keepitsecret (100)

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I really like this,
i loved all the references,
it's something that i can relate with.
I love how you use the colour to show some powerful emotion!
This is a brilliant piece of writing! :D

August 8th, 2010 at 05:08pm

sicsempertyrannis (100)

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I liked the first paragraph best.
All the references.
It was a very powerful piece and I really enjoyed it.

Good luck!:]

July 30th, 2010 at 09:09pm