I liked this a lot. It was very readable, it really draws the reader in from the get-go. You didn't go very far into character development, but that's really hard to do with short stories. Also, you had a little error in there that I noticed 'though' is supposed to be 'threw'. And also, the focus of the story was not on Anthropophobia. Honestly, her fear of people is totally understandable. Phobias are irrational, and her's wasn't. It was still a good piece, though. Good job. :)
I liked this a lot. It was very readable, it really draws the reader in from the get-go. You didn't go very far into character development, but that's really hard to do with short stories. Also, you had a little error in there that I noticed 'though' is supposed to be 'threw'. And also, the focus of the story was not on Anthropophobia. Honestly, her fear of people is totally understandable. Phobias are irrational, and her's wasn't. It was still a good piece, though. Good job. :)