All I Want For Christmas Is You (Two) - Comments

quite delicious. ;) honestly, i enjoyed every second of it.

thanks for all the comments ppl! i cant believe how strong this fic is still going lol :)

cuntmuffin:

Bahaha geezus christ
That girl must have a lot of stamina cause I would have been wiped out only after frank

^ What she said lol

Honestly, it's hot as hell o_O

Extremely well written, it's so hard (no pun intended) to write such a full on sexy story and keep it believable and not too corny or owt, but you did write it so well it did seem believable (except for finding Frank and Gerard on my door step of course =P which I'm not giving up on lmao ).

5 stars Jlo, it's awesome!

Sorry it took me so long to comment over here....I'm such a slacker I know lol

xoxo

oh my fucking gawd, that was the hottest thing i've ever read. you should post more of these. you're a really good write too by the way!

STICK A FORK IN ME - I'M DONE!

OMFG! Regardless of it being a Frerard/threesome whatever, this first chapter really packs a punch! I'm sweating a bit just reading it - very well written. Bring on Chapter 2.

Bahaha geezus christ
That girl must have a lot of stamina cause I would have been wiped out only after frank

This is an awesome story

whoa lucky girl

o.0
woah...*speechless*
where's part two? post now!

I love it! It's amazing! I can't wait for the second part keep it up babe!

You dirty dirty bitch. I love it! And you come off as so shy and retiring! YOur just as bad as the rest of us lol.

Fave line 'and over the white fluffy carpets scattered around' white carpet? Fluffy? You know thats got to be hellish to clean.

Kx

Post it on WOF porn section, you'll get more comments.

wow...just wow!!!

MY EYEZZZZZZZZ! KOOL, but not really into boyxboyxgirl threesome. but it was kool non the less. cant wait for the 2nd part.

Didn't you have a part 2 already? I thought you did.....

Uh yeah, what do I say to that? xD

I'm stuck between commenting on the sex and the writing but I'll go safe and comment on the writing whilst avoiding the sex as much as is humanly possible. xD

It's really well written, seriously. A lot of sex-fiction gets too into the sex and completely loses the plot at times but this keeps the story intact at all times whilst describing what's going on. You could maybe dwell a bit more on what they're feeling rather than doing but other than that it's totally brilliant.

Does anyone make characters up anymore? Im not saying it's bad just.....weird