Rosewood - Comments

I can't even, I mean... jesus?

I loved it, is all. I loved it.

Woah, sad, so sad.
Dude, damn that is just... 0.0
Anyway, I really enjoyed this, you wrote it so well and everything about it was amazing.
The layout and banner was lovely too and the title is lovely.
This was filled with so much descriptions and fear and emotions and everything was written exceptionally well and I felt like I was there.
Well done. <3

omg... sadddddd

Oh my god! I loved that.
It was such a sad ending. I never tear up reading or watching anything, but my eyes were watering when I was done that.
I loved how descriptive it was, and that I could feel the emotions pouring out of it. All the hope that Ryan felt throughout the beginning, that later turned into desperation and fear.
I thought this was so greatly written. It was also pretty interesting how you laid out the letter too. Not all at once but where it fit in the story.
Loved it all anyways.
Thanks for your entry! :D

I thought this was sad and the banner is very nice. I loved how the banner was somewhat dark as well, matching wonderfully with the tone of the story. I felt a lot of pain in Ryan's character, and I wish there was more of a background, but I liked the suspiciousness of it all. I wasn't sure what exactly happened at the end, but did Ryan kill himself because Brendon was late and thought he didn't love him? It's was sad that if he came on time things would have turned out differently. I thought you captured this story well with simple writing and it worked for this.