Beach. - Comments

So cute :)
Your writing is so clear and smooth, too; it flowed so well. And I love the way you put the prompt into the story without making it sound awkward. :D

This was tooo cute.<3
I didn't notice a single flaw and your writing style is just as smooth as silk. (;
Amazing Job.<3 C:

Yes! Like said above, Follow-up? O:
<3

i saw sparks * [:

Aw, this was cute. [: I adored it. You used the prompt very, very well! I never would have guessed that you had to incorporate it; as it all flowed nicely. [: [Did that make sense, aha?]
Like i saw spark said-- you definitely should do a follow-up! :D
Wonderful job! :D <3

This was short and sweet and wonderful :)
Really cute.
I pretty much agree with all the other comments.

I wish I could write drabbles this good XD
I really liked all of the anticipation built up in just this small amount of words, I had that "blind date" feeling myself.
I also loved how you incorporated the prompt. None of the objects mentioned felt too forced in; everything flowed completely naturally.
The ending was ah-mazing! It actually made me want more. You should totally do a follow-up drabble about the date.
I'd read it.=D

This was so cute.
You included your prompts wonderfully.
This was a cute littel ditty.
Well-written and interesting for sure.
Awesome.

Aw, this is so well written and I like how you included the prompts so well into the story, you didn't just shove them in anywhere.
It's cute, I like it (: