Every Breath You Take - Comments

I LOVE IT!!!
I do hope that Dylan and Frank will be friends.
They sound like the kind of people who would get along...
I LOVE IT, ITS SO AWESOME!!!

I may need another character (to possibly be with Dylan) so inbox me if you're interested.

And Thank You SO Much for taking the time to comment.

*gives cookies*

Cara xoxo

Dylan and Mikey are awesome. Dylan because (s)he stands up for her beliefs. And Mikey's awesome because he's reading comic books and doesn't really pay attention.

Love those characters, great chapter.

dylan's a nice classmate...and i hope she and frank become friends! and wow, she got mikey to at least stop reading--that dork--made me smile! lots!! =]

good start and i love dylan!

Frank's such a dork, but we love 'im anyways. Great story, update soon, so we can see what's up with Gerard!

this is a cute story so far...i'm intrigued...can't wait to see where you go with it. =]

BAHAH.
a retarded kangaroo!
:D
your a good writterr.

i likee it. (: