This Love Will Be Our Downfall - Comments

AWH OMGGGG <333

Amazingly cute chapter. Though the Hawks winning the cup agains the Pens was a little sad because I'm a Pens fan always lol.

The fried hot dogs was a little nasty lol. Great update as always. Can't wait for baby Kane to be born =)

<3 I awh'd and laughed this entire chapter.

What a bitchin way to make me think.

Luke sounds like a sweet guy...I kinda don't want to see him get hurt. Yay, for Patrick maturing some

I'm not liking Katey. SHe's being a real bitch to her bff. I would just keep my opions to myself if my bff was in love with a guy Again great u[date

loveeeed it.

loved it...not really sure i could see patrick as a daddy yet but hey.

<3 awh I loved this chapter!

so i found this one first and loved it....THEN I realized it was a sequel so I went back and read Meanwhile in Chicago..Loved it too.

I really hope Patrick chooses the right thing....he needs to make this better

D: jfc.

<3 LOVED THIS ONE.

1. Drake = best driving music ever.
2. You mentioned "guido" and 'Jersey Shore.'
3. BEST. CHAPTER. EVER.

YOU CANNOT LEAVE ME HANGING ON THIS.
fer serious.

DONT DIE BLAINE YOU MIGHT MISS THE BEST PART. hahaha

DUDE. ARE YOU GUYS TRYING TO KILL ME WITH THE AWESOMENESS?!

FIRST Comment, succes!
Ohhh wow, poor lizzie.
Cant wit for moree :)