@ Queen Obscene Agh now that you said that I kinda don't wanna post the next chapter because you're totally right... but ehh, fuck it! Prepare yourself for some rage inducing fan-fiction of the next level! Lol :P
THANK GOD. I don't think I could have handled another friggin' ounce of Rachel/Addie sexual tension and when they got into the heavy petting I thought I was going to squeal with not. HE STILL HASN'T DEFLOWERED HER THOUGH AND IT UPSETS ME. Sigh...in due time. But weeeeee an update, yay! And two of them! They were both so good, too. :') this story gets better and better. It's my favorite on here. You have to update more because I diiiiiiie without this in my life
FUCKING CECIL THOUGH WHAT A FUCKING TURDFACE except she and Rachel wuv each other, so maybe she can stay :3
Alright this comment is getting faggy so I'll stop. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY. GAH.
What a monumental dickhead (Cecil, obviously...Actually all of them except Rachel)! That's fucking outrageous behaviour. Good for Addie on telling them to fuck off.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS SHE PUNCHED HIM! HELL YEAH! Oh my god, I've missed this story so much. :3 I'm glad you updated! I had a feeling something was going to go wrong when she started warming up to Baz. And I love the poor dude but DAMN am I happy she nailed him one. Hopefully Rachel finds out and then all will be well again.
I LOVE YOU BY THE WAY. NEVER STOP UPDATING AGAIN. I'VE MISSED YOU.
Okay...so she and Rachel still haven't banged...okay. I'll be patient. It has to happen sometime, right?
GUH. Baz is slightly creepy with the whole molestation thing, and he's being a right dick for just feelin' her up, but I still want them to have babies. ALL OF THEM.
This story frustrates me. But I love it! But it frustrates me. :|
Sebastian's acting properly rapey isn't he? I totally agree with Alex about Addie shagging Rachel. And I'd like to add that someone needs to hit Sebastian. Somewhere it'll hurt.
Oh my God, this story makes my life. I just read every chapter and am wondering now why I didn't before. It just...fucking rocks, frankly. And why the fuck doesn't this have more readers? 'Cause it definitely should.
So, three things: 1. Addie needs to have sex with Rachel. NOW. 2. Sebastian needs to stop being a dick, please. 3. THEN they have a threesome and make little Skid babies and the world is well.
Wow, so I love hair bands and have been looking for a place to read fanfiction and I stumbled onto this site and joined so that I could read your story. You have a very interesting style and the story doesn't feel like a Mary-Sue which is welcome. I love Sebastian and Rachel and am interested to see what is going to happen. I don't like Baz much yet though, but I can totally see him acting that way. What in the world did Cecil mean about her being Sebastian's for the night? Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.
Wow, so I love hair bands and have been looking for a place to read fanfiction and I stumbled onto this site and joined so that I could read your story. You have a very interesting style and the story doesn't feel like a Mary-Sue which is welcome. I love Sebastian and Rachel and am interested to see what is going to happen. I don't like Baz much yet though, but I can totally see him acting that way. What in the world did Cecil mean about her being Sebastian's for the night? Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.
I can explain how much I love this story! I had been mibba-less for a while (so that's why there were no comments from me haha) and I get excited whenever I see updates of your story, I love the way you write!
Oh and Merry Christmas to you too in case you don't update :D