Knocking on Heaven's Door - Comments

wow, this is really amazing. it's totally sweet and sincere, but gut wrenchingly sad at the same time, and that's not easy to do. it flowed really well, and i read it all at once because i just couldn't stop.

there were a couple of small grammar mistakes, but apart from that it was perfect. i'd suggest just a brief read through to catch those little mistakes. i really enjoyed reading this , you've done a really good job. <3

Okay, I swear this is one of the best stories I've read. You did such a wonderful job and the part about Nevvie going to the train station made me cry. I feel kind of sorry for her; but the last line was pure gold. Grand work; keep it up! <3

That was so sad and amazing and I bawled my eyes out.

aww my god
you made me cry that was sooo beautiful

That has to be one of the best stories I've read. It was so cute at the beginning. Nate and Nevvie playing those cute games with dragons and knights had me awwing so much! Then it started to get sad. I thought I was going to cry. :(
Amazing story!

It was sad, but very, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)

Damn you,
Jeez you made me cry my eyes out.
Not to mention I was listening to a sad song while reading this (:
I really, truly love this.