Bullets on Flagstone - Comments

I like the banner; it’s simple, and looks good. ^_^ The color you chose for the background is also flattering to the banner, and the text on white makes it easy to read. All in all, the summary page looks really good. :)

I’m not much of a Supernatural fan, but I’ve watched the show enough to realize that this is a fan-fiction about Dean. I’ve never read a Supernatural fan-fiction, either, but I really liked this one. It’s very descriptive, and the way you’ve narrated it almost made me feel like I was in the bar, watching all of this happen rather than just reading it. You have really good vocabulary, as well. There’s not much else that I can say other than that I really liked reading this. ^_^

Once I finished reading this, I thought it was an okay read. You do have some grammar issues that kind of took away from the story, but I enjoyed this. The banner is lovely and I hear a lot of good things about the Supernatural, I've seen it about twice, I believe.

But this wasn't hard to follow at all. I liked the tone and the way Dean carried himself. Even though I didn't know what the chracters intension were, I liked it.