Never Looking Back - Comments

I love the layout you made. The colors and the pictures, it looks good.

The intro was perfect and right after I read it I spun around in my chair xD

When you were describing that Parker didn’t show up in class I was like “oh shit don’t be dead!” but then he wasn’t and I was all happy.

I LOVE the story you made, I would never been able to take a picture of a boy blowing bubbles with gum and make it into something deeper like you did. I like how clear and concrete your words are and how you didn’t spend half of this story writing a background story about her. You jumped right into the scene and described their relationship as it progressed. Not many people can write like that or accomplish what you did.

Now, I’m a grammar Nazi and I also like how I only found one typo and it’s not even a big deal “So most day Parker” you just forgot the ‘s’ on days for it to make sense. And that’s not even an accomplishment T_T haha

I’m giving you a 9

I liked the way you went with your picture; not many people can pull off something this serious and not make it cheesy or over the top. I think you did a very good job and you're writing is really good too. I give you an eight.

I love this story! It was sweet and powerful at the same time, and I absolutley loved the ending. You have amazing talent and superb originality.
For the contest you definatley deserve a 9!
Keep on writing!

I really, really, really liked this.
For the contest (sorry this is kind of late) I give you an eight.
:)
Fantastic Job!

Powerful!!! I want to hear more!! Really, honestly one of the best stories on here! written with true emotion and style