The latest chapter was very intimate. Jimmy and Raquel's relationship has its ups and downs, but there is that underlying loyalty that keeps them around each other. For Raquel to know that Jimmy will always be there for her, must be overwhelming. The question is, will she take her 'I love you' back? And will that decision be based on her insecurities? I'm looking forward to that update.
Ok so I'm really liking this story. Besides the fact that I'm an Avenged fan, I enjoy stories that pay attention to detail. That was definitely evident in your story. I'm also loving Raquel's take-no-shit attitude toward Synyster. You can tell that she is only looking out for her friend, she is loyal. Kelsey is a girl that was in the right moment at the right time but with the weirdest results. She was hit in the face. It's not a bar fight but one can dream. I can't wait to see their relationships blossom with the two men.
OMFG SHE DID NOT JUST DIE?! D:
DO. NOT. STOP.
SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!
Okay I'm done ranting. AMAZING story :D