THAT WAS SOOO CREEPY! What's with the creepy one-shots, gah. It was lovely though. I could see it playing out in my head like a scary movie. The tempo really picked up at the end, and was really good. I enjoyed it thoroughly. :)
Wow. That completely took me off guard. It was horrible- in a good way. This was one of the creepiest stories I have read on this site- not only was it scary, it had a great story to it, meaning it wasn't just some random slasher type thing. Thank you for the frighteningly good read!
I would like to crown you: 'The Queen of Detail". Scary, very scary. I like the picture. It was very, creepy. So, thank you, for my glorious loss of sleep tonight!
Good Lord, is that the chick from The Grudge?! O_O If it is, I WANNA SEE THAT MOVIE! Anyhoo, this is so gosh-darned creepy, like whoa. Oh, and before I go on, you made a teeny mistake here: Laura’s eyes widened slightly, but she said noting.Noting should be nothing (: AND OMFG, THE ENDING REMINDED ME OF THE UNINVITED O_O That was seriously the most amazing scary story I've read on this site. Creepy, creepy, creepy. Lovely job (: <3
Holy crap. I don't know if I'm going to be able to sleep tonight.
THAT WAS SO FREAKING CREEPY.
Sorry, had to let that out. xD It was pretty cool though. I could see everything happening which might have made it worse, but it was good. I don't even know what else to say.
That picture in the summary was not nice. Not nice at all.
AND GOD THAT WAS A CREEPY STORY!
Seriously. Not nice. Not nice at all. I have half the mind not to post this comment at all and go back to my writing like nothing happened. But the little girl standing next to me won't let me. XP
You know what I always love about your horror themed stories though? A lot of people get caught up in the scary so much they forget to give the story purpose. Yours always has purpose. It's not just some random ghost torturing people for no reason. It always has a back story and a reason, and, even if your characters are terrified, by the end they know that reason.