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  • tholomew plague.

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    Aw, this is so fucking sweet.
    It's adorable.
    It reminds me of me and my boyfriend.
    August 6th, 2010 at 06:45am
  • for shame!

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    The first though in my head was AWWWWW
    This was totally adorable, and pretty much just every girls' dream.
    Freaking cute.
    August 6th, 2010 at 05:25am
  • xxPotterSeriesxx

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    this is really sweet and cute!! it goes together perfectly! i would love for this to happen to me, though i don't think it will :D still very good!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 04:22pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I literally died when I read this sentence: There was a smile on his face, telling me he was trying not to laugh at my failed attempts at counting the stars. It reminds me of A Walk to Remember a little bit (:
    I really want a guy to kiss me under the stars, lololol!
    Lovely job, once again! <3
    August 2nd, 2010 at 06:10am
  • hiyaitsjackie

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    this was really cute and it all flowed together great. i like this, but i asked for a link to the original so can you get that to me some how? thanks! good job!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 06:05am
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