Okay; so right now,it's like, 11:15 pm here and i'm pretty much falling asleep after slaughtering a Math assignment - but that was the most a-fucking-dorable thing I've ever read :3
This was really good. I thought it was really well-written, and the layout was beautiful. You did a very good job at squeezing so much into a oneshot. I loved how innocent Gavin was compared to John and how well they worked together despite it.