Poor Amelia! She shouldn't feel guilty!
March 13th, 2011 at 01:28pm
Married To The Mafia...? - Comments
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love the update :DMarch 13th, 2011 at 12:59pm
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i've never put a comment on my own story... but the above claim I got my own character's names wrong in my OWN story pisses me off.
the names are right, read previous chapters to realise that.March 13th, 2011 at 10:18am -
Good update. But please look over the names in the chapter, several times you use the wrong last/first names of characters.March 13th, 2011 at 09:18am
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im such a predicament.
i dont know if i should cry from happiness or sadness. im SO beyond happy that amelia & ethan are lovey dovey hubby & wify but im so sad there is only 4 more chapters to this//':
i loved how h said he's out because he didnt want HER in danger not them but amelia, so cute(':
(i know im bi-polar & have a tear for everything lol) & the ending, made my heart skip a beat that she pounced on him!! who cares that mason is there, the moment couldnt be more perfect♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
loved this chapter♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
& amelia's balls, she's been showing them alot lately!! i wanna say update soon but than i dont bcus that will be just another closer step to the end (why the hell isnt there a broken heart?)
-thank you&come again.February 14th, 2011 at 04:07am -
I haven't been on Mibba for over a year now, and in my boredom driven state I decided that it might be nice to find something to read. I stayed up to 4AM reading this story and the prequel, as I was completely hooked and unable to move away.
Besides a few little spelling mistakes, I really enjoy your writing style. You have an interesting sense of language and composition that I find most intriguing.
Can't wait to read more!February 13th, 2011 at 10:20am -
love the update :DFebruary 12th, 2011 at 08:12pm
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that was a great chapter.....LOVED ITFebruary 12th, 2011 at 07:36pm
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YAY! =]February 12th, 2011 at 07:24pm
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Yeah, it wasn't incredibly dramatic but it seemed more real. Mason's a stupid idiot. I'm finally happy that Ethan's out now.February 12th, 2011 at 04:44pm
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Ugh Mason, give it up!February 12th, 2011 at 04:17pm
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love it as per usual. Of course she would shoot him though.anyway i'm sad it's always over. sniff sniff. But it was a great story. all good things must come to an end, correct?February 12th, 2011 at 05:42am
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aww yay good i loved this! theyre too cuteFebruary 8th, 2011 at 02:19am
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still amazing! keep on writing =]February 6th, 2011 at 07:45am
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that was a nice chapter..they're so cute togetherFebruary 6th, 2011 at 01:54am
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Hey!! I really love ur storie!! Every time i have a mail from mibba and see that its from this storie i actually smile and click to read it asap!! Plz keep on writing!February 6th, 2011 at 12:05am
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sorry for being AWOL so lately, i hate my self for not commenting last chapter... but finals are COMPLETELY over now! & i missed the chance to tell NO! that no way no way no way in any way am i getting tired of this story! it feels like were barely experiencing amelia & ethan interacting. If i had a chance i would never want this to end.... please dont! MORE!MORE!MORE! but i guess if your getting tired of it what can you do right? there WILL definitely be tears (on my behalf) when chapter 30 rolls around. Its kinda depressing really. I wont lie when i say this story kept me sane for so long...!! Amelia & ethan are by far THE best characters out there<3
i need more of what happened in this chapter lol it was amazing & you SHOULD like it not only a little but ALOT but it was GREAT as ALL your chapters... why do you doubt your talent so much? trust me you take writing to a whole new level lovely!
update soon<3
-thank you&come again.February 5th, 2011 at 08:25pm -
love the update :DFebruary 5th, 2011 at 03:34pm
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It's finishing at Chapter 30?! I'm sad now! I'm gonna miss this. A lot.February 5th, 2011 at 02:34pm
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Hello again! First off I have to say.. YES! Loved the last part of the chapter!! Yay for steamy-ness. I enjoyed this chapter. 2nd I read your authors note, and I can truthfully say that I will be sad when it ends, but I get why your doing it and you have my support! :D Just saying this in advance; Thanks!! Thanks for writing a story that I cant get enough of :D
-Vicky
ps. I also enjoy your other story very much :DFebruary 5th, 2011 at 02:02pm
