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  • let it rain

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    Good job my friend :)
    October 2nd, 2010 at 06:43am
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    Good job my friend :)
    October 2nd, 2010 at 06:43am
  • lalala247

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    I love the very beginning part; it drags you into the story, making you want to read more of the story, wanting to see what happened. :) Wow, that's a great idea making Bellatrix have an adopted child.
    Awwwww sadness. :( I cried when I read that Fred died but I liked how Nicole is having flashbacks. :) wonderful idea
    awwww she died.
    But, really good story! :D great job!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 11:25pm
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