Don't Worry - Comments

I really like the style of this, it reads like you're hearing it from a friend, and I really like that you chose that type of formatting for this. Since I'm horrible at drabbles, I also envy your ability to portray your given emotion in such few words. There was a clear beginning, middle, and end that some drabbles tend to lack, so it was refreshing to see that you'd accomplished a full story in only 125 words

Like others above me have mentioned, this drabble rings true.

This was so awesome and really true

Very ture. Good use of words

Well not much left to say after all those wondeful comments now. Other than, I really liked it. It was simple & to the point. It was exactly what it was supposed to be: telling a whole story & getting to know a character in as few words as possible. The word was used quite spectacularly.
Thanks for yer entry! :D

The layout for this story was PERFECT!
I loved the way you opened the story, it really drew the reader in, and then closing it in the same way wrapped it up perfectly. It's like the story came full circle :)
I think that you write beautifully.
I loved how you managed to tell a whole story and develop a character in so few words. Drabbles are very hard and you pulled it all off so wonderfully :)
Congratulations!
And good luck in your contest =D

Woah.
This was amazing.
It was so raw & honest, too.
It was very emotionally powerful, so I could actually feel it.
The layout was nice, as well.
I really liked this. <3
Great job! (:

I love this.
The layout and title was great and fitted the story well!
It's so true and honest, straight to the point.
I felt the emotion in it and it was well written.
I loved how you had the first and last paragraph the same except for a few word swaps.
Well done!

Wow.
I feel special.
I'm first comment!
This was amazing, hon.
All in all, it was true, too.
The layout was gorgeous, as well.