December 5th, 2010 at 12:43am
Don't Worry - Comments
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This was so awesome and really trueDecember 3rd, 2010 at 10:56pm
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Very ture. Good use of wordsAugust 4th, 2010 at 07:28am
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Well not much left to say after all those wondeful comments now. Other than, I really liked it. It was simple & to the point. It was exactly what it was supposed to be: telling a whole story & getting to know a character in as few words as possible. The word was used quite spectacularly.
Thanks for yer entry! :DAugust 3rd, 2010 at 08:39am -
The layout for this story was PERFECT!
I loved the way you opened the story, it really drew the reader in, and then closing it in the same way wrapped it up perfectly. It's like the story came full circle :)
I think that you write beautifully.
I loved how you managed to tell a whole story and develop a character in so few words. Drabbles are very hard and you pulled it all off so wonderfully :)
Congratulations!
And good luck in your contest =DAugust 3rd, 2010 at 06:51am -
Woah.
This was amazing.
It was so raw & honest, too.
It was very emotionally powerful, so I could actually feel it.
The layout was nice, as well.
I really liked this. <3
Great job! (:August 3rd, 2010 at 03:57am -
I love this.
The layout and title was great and fitted the story well!
It's so true and honest, straight to the point.
I felt the emotion in it and it was well written.
I loved how you had the first and last paragraph the same except for a few word swaps.
Well done!August 3rd, 2010 at 03:56am -
Wow.
I feel special.
I'm first comment!
This was amazing, hon.
All in all, it was true, too.
The layout was gorgeous, as well.August 3rd, 2010 at 03:50am
Like others above me have mentioned, this drabble rings true.