It took me some days to read the whole thing so I figured I should leave you a comment. This is AMAZING I loved it so much! I'm gonna read the sequel as well obviously. Seriously this is fucking AWESOME.
I usually hate happy ending but it was just kinda perfect and I fucking love it. You've written it so well and it was so fun to read! :D
Aww!! I think ending it right there would be good! And then like do a sequal of it but, like you said, in Zack's point of view from it from the very beginning
Zacky's POV would actually be really interesting. Though Johnny's might be better... Really, it's up to you.
TAP is my most favourite story ever. I'm going to try and make this comment worthwhile, just for you :]
Dad's have a good way of invading one's privacy at the worst moments. Both my parents used to have a *wonerful* habit of walking in while I was getting dressed. My dad, he'd politely apologise and close the door the second he realised hahaha. My mum? Yeah. She'd come in and try to talk to me.
Crazy fuckers.
Anyway... Now that TAP is [possibly] finished then maybe there's a chance of Choking Hazard being updated XD
I usually hate happy ending but it was just kinda perfect and I fucking love it. You've written it so well and it was so fun to read! :D