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  • vannyscherry

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    Please continue :-D
    November 11th, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • Jumbo658

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    Dude, let me tell you, how last night when i found this, it was EXACTLY what i was jonesin for.
    Seriously, i was sooooo sad when i saw that i was on the last part because it makes me want to read it forever. Dude..i love you. idk you. but i love you. you MUST continue this.
    i'll cry if you dont haha...seriously.
    February 26th, 2011 at 06:07pm
  • Poison001x

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    I'm seriously in love with this story lol. Continue it please! :D
    October 18th, 2010 at 08:25pm
  • Missdeathdaisy

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    uhh, continue it :D
    October 4th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • stargoboom

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    mexicans.
    October 1st, 2010 at 12:23am
  • astro zombies

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    CONTINUEEE!
    September 21st, 2010 at 12:36am
  • Saul Hudson

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    CONTINUE ITTTT OR ELSE I SHALL EAATER YOU <3

    Just kidding Riles I love you

    But I think you should totally continue it, It's wonderful and I deeply enjoy reading about Lottie and Nikki's ongoing relationship.
    September 21st, 2010 at 12:05am
  • ti-nspire

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    DEFINITELY CONTINUE IT!
    I really enjoy it! :D
    September 20th, 2010 at 09:31pm
  • custard pie

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    I loooove it and you and Nikki fucking Sixx.<333333333
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • Saul Hudson

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    This is insanely awesome Riley.
    I love Nikki`s fits.
    There legit awesome.
    But he`s awesome =D
    More soon
    August 20th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • astro zombies

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    This is a really good story (:
    Sweet. Now Nikki will throw Mr. Condon out the window :D
    August 20th, 2010 at 12:32am
  • jessiocstories

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    i love this...it's very good! plz continue!
    August 18th, 2010 at 07:17pm
  • ti-nspire

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    I just read this. I love it so far!
    Wishing I woulda found it sooner!
    My favorite part HAS to be the MEOW part. Nikki Sixx has to be the best damn cat in the world.
    I know I want him as MY pet ;)
    Hah, can't wait for more.
    August 18th, 2010 at 09:03am
  • custard pie

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    me likey, baby. <3333
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:59am
  • gunner

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    I can't believe I JUST found this...
    Dude, you should have notified me! SERIOUSLY! I love it, its really good!
    August 17th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • Saul Hudson

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    Haha so I'm just going to start with the first chapter, even though I've read all of them. Numerous times. xD
    I like the summary, it was a couple paragraphs long. It gives the reader a brief look into what's going on. I loved the last sentance
    . What she doesn't know is that keeping this spoiled rock star could cost her her job, her house, and maybe even her life.
    It makes the reader want to know more, now haha. Espeically the maybe even her life It makes the reader pause and think for a moment, it's a cliff hanger per sue.

    Then I like the layout, especially the pictures, I want the link of where you got that one ahaha. I've never seen it before

    The first paragraph sets the tone almost immediatly with Nikki sleeping in the car and Lottie finding him sleeping there.

    You make it sound quite realistic about what takes place, especially how she's not all. "OMFG It's Nikki Sixx, stay over at my house tonight? Please so we can have some kinky sexxx?" She sounds extremely hesitant to let him stay but eventually caves.

    Her work day amuses me extremely, especially her manager.

    And then she goes home and he's army crawling across the floor high as a kite. Seeing stuff.
    He does sound like someone on heroin, I speak from experience.... And I liked the ending, it confirmed everyone's thoughts that he is indeed a addict and leaves the reader wanting more. =)
    August 16th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • Saul Hudson

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    Hahah I loved it.
    She's going to turn into a junkie isn't she?
    And then who's going to help Nikki?
    Answer: ME
    August 16th, 2010 at 06:29am
  • Fang Bang

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    This story is AMAZING!!! :D

    I'm really enjoying this...Keep it up!
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:39pm
  • Saul Hudson

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    I love this. You make it seem really realistic for someone who hasn't been on drugs before.
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    =P
    Awesome update though
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • Tracey Sullivan

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    I love this fic :D. A dead kid in the cornor of the room would totally freak me out too. Nikki is such a spazz lol.
    August 11th, 2010 at 05:16am