Dude, let me tell you, how last night when i found this, it was EXACTLY what i was jonesin for. Seriously, i was sooooo sad when i saw that i was on the last part because it makes me want to read it forever. Dude..i love you. idk you. but i love you. you MUST continue this. i'll cry if you dont haha...seriously.
I just read this. I love it so far! Wishing I woulda found it sooner! My favorite part HAS to be the MEOW part. Nikki Sixx has to be the best damn cat in the world. I know I want him as MY pet ;) Hah, can't wait for more.
Haha so I'm just going to start with the first chapter, even though I've read all of them. Numerous times. xD I like the summary, it was a couple paragraphs long. It gives the reader a brief look into what's going on. I loved the last sentance . What she doesn't know is that keeping this spoiled rock star could cost her her job, her house, and maybe even her life. It makes the reader want to know more, now haha. Espeically the maybe even her life It makes the reader pause and think for a moment, it's a cliff hanger per sue.
Then I like the layout, especially the pictures, I want the link of where you got that one ahaha. I've never seen it before
The first paragraph sets the tone almost immediatly with Nikki sleeping in the car and Lottie finding him sleeping there.
You make it sound quite realistic about what takes place, especially how she's not all. "OMFG It's Nikki Sixx, stay over at my house tonight? Please so we can have some kinky sexxx?" She sounds extremely hesitant to let him stay but eventually caves.
Her work day amuses me extremely, especially her manager.
And then she goes home and he's army crawling across the floor high as a kite. Seeing stuff. He does sound like someone on heroin, I speak from experience.... And I liked the ending, it confirmed everyone's thoughts that he is indeed a addict and leaves the reader wanting more. =)