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  • zeldachick14

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    Except for the part with her dying i feel like your story is exactly how i lived only months ago. This is a very realistic story, and thank you for writing it.
    July 14th, 2016 at 11:51am
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    @ Diligence
    Thanks...I think...
    July 9th, 2013 at 06:06am
  • capheus

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    Well that escalated quickly..

    I mean really, it did.

    When I started reading I was kind of reading at a slow kind of pace and then as I went on I began speeding up because there was so much intensity in your words. This was really loaded for a one-shot, I think. Reading the end of it I was really shocked and awed. I feel like it was a bit much but it's a one-shot, it's your story and there was so much emotion within the story I didn't really care.

    I loved your description too, the last three lines were probably the best in my opinion, they just really stood out to me. I enjoyed reading this.
    July 8th, 2013 at 08:42am
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    Huh...never saw the movie.
    August 29th, 2010 at 04:47am
  • aGIRLnamedRYAN

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    The girl in the picture kinda looks like Kristen Stewart from the Runaways
    August 14th, 2010 at 08:19pm
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