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  • celestial_royalty

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    Well, not too much to say. The ending was fun and very sweet and I'm very happy with the way things were resolved with Robbie. I would, however, suggest editing your writing. I know everyone has typos and I definitely do as well, but there are quite a few spelling errors, and your work would be much improved without them. Onto the sequel!
    September 26th, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    So...in chapter 10, Miri stomped on Derek's food to make him pay attention. xD I think you meant foot. And Leni completely deserved to lose Seth in ch 15 for the pain she caused him. Tough love, that's what you get for being stupid. It's the perfect thing to happen. Being selfish and stupid has bad consequences. I'll keep reading- I need to catch up, and I'll get back to you when I'm done.
    September 26th, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • shaylove

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    <333
    AWW :D
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    Well I'm going to miss this story! I miss Love Makes Blind! I have been here from the beggining it feels like its like my little baby or something lol eventhough its yours lol (:
    March 20th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • Kristalynnxx

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    awww sad to see it end!! but now I'm off to read the sequel!!
    great job!! I love this story. :)
    March 20th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • nearly headless.

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    Oh.
    It's over.
    I'm sort of sad, now that it's done.
    BUT.
    I have Love Your Enemy to look forward to! And I can't wait, dear.
    March 20th, 2011 at 01:50am
  • Kristalynnxx

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    Love this one!! Elenia and Seth are finally starting their lives together! :)
    Can't wait for the epilogue and the sequel!! :)
    keep up the great work!!
    update soon!!
    March 19th, 2011 at 08:18pm
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    Loved it but sad it ended!! About to look at the sequel! (:
    March 17th, 2011 at 11:51am
  • shaylove

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    YAYYYYYYYYYY <33
    March 12th, 2011 at 12:55am
  • shaylove

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    YAYYYYYYYYYY <33
    March 12th, 2011 at 12:55am
  • Kristalynnxx

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    yay they're getting married!!! :) I LOVE this story I simply cannot wait for the next chapter :)
    update soon!! :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • carly13666

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    awe that was a great mather daughter moment
    March 10th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • choirgirlx3

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    it was very nice.
    March 10th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • Kristalynnxx

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    love the update!!
    so much happend I don't know where to begin!! :)
    I can't wait for the next one!!
    keep up the fantastic work!!
    update soon!! :)
    March 10th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • shaylove

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    Awww :)
    March 10th, 2011 at 12:10am
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    update! lol (:
    March 7th, 2011 at 12:20am
  • choirgirlx3

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    wow i love it. reallly great update soon
    March 5th, 2011 at 02:08am
  • In Love With Love

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    I wonder what will happen next :)
    March 4th, 2011 at 04:31pm
  • Hearts.and.Stars

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    I love your story, it's really well written. However, I do take offense to the term 'retarded person'. I work with the mentally disabled, and they can comprehend a lot more than most would even imagine.
    March 4th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • pgigymnastics

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    loved it! :)
    March 4th, 2011 at 01:23am
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