The Midnight Murderer - Comments

Josipa (3960)

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Kurtni Von Teese:
"A cynical leprechaun inside him has invoked."

You phrase things in such interesting ways. I have never heard someone describe a cynicism in terms of leprechauns before.

Why thank you (: I believe that all of us have leprechauns inside :mrgreen:

May 3rd, 2008 at 08:09pm

wx12 (10125)

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"A cynical leprechaun inside him has invoked."

You phrase things in such interesting ways. Smiley

I have never heard someone describe a cynicism in terms of leprechauns before.

May 2nd, 2008 at 08:52pm

Josipa (3960)

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Danke schon, Stephanie (:

April 3rd, 2008 at 10:36am

Scars. (100)

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This was beautiful.

I love your writing style...
Which means I will go read the rest of your stories.

April 3rd, 2008 at 04:57am

Josipa (3960)

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Emma!:
Amazing writing style (:

WHYTHANKYOUSOMUCH :D

January 17th, 2008 at 08:40am

Emma! (100)

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Amazing writing style (:

January 17th, 2008 at 07:43am

Josipa (3960)

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Joanie Prince:
This is really really good!

I wish I could write as well as you do. Now I want to know how this will turn out!!!

Thank you very much (:
I'll update it soon but expect twists and turns; that's my writing in a nutshell :D

January 12th, 2008 at 11:16am

jared leto (100)

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This is really really good!

I wish I could write as well as you do. Now I want to know how this will turn out!!!

January 12th, 2008 at 02:26am

Josipa (3960)

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Die, Raznor's Kurtni, thank you both. So much (:

I wish I could write for CSI. But I'm just too cool for them :file:

January 2nd, 2008 at 02:54pm

wx12 (10125)

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A caressing summer breeze interlaced with shy cracking sounds coming from the flaming papers, kept the combustion within a metal trash can alive.
What a brilliant, attention catching line to start a story with

You could so write for CSI Smiley

January 2nd, 2008 at 01:27am

Kerplunk Girl (150)

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Yet another perfect story by the one and only, Jospia.

“Detective Malone”, he continued, letting a polished six-pointed star badge pinned to his shirt pocket speak more on his behalf.

“Setting my life on fire”, the boy retorted, flunking yet another page in the garbage can.

I just wonder how you come up with most of those descriptions. It's like..out of this world. :lol:

Harrowing trees were dancing in the breeze, dabbing the street lights with their welcoming branches. Grains of sand, traveling through the air and dry leaves jiving to the rhythm of their own rustling sound caused by the gentle puffs of the wind, formed a summer mist.

I don't think anyone can compare to you when it comes to descriptions and setting someone's imagination on fire. There's no doubt about it, truly no doubt.

The plot is yet again, awesome. When you describe the kid, I first thought of Dujo. :lmfao When you read it, it's like you know exactly how a murderer feels. Empty, troubled. At last, you let me wanting know how this will turn out. Who he killed, why he killed them...If he actually killed.

Yet again, well done. NOOOO DOUBT.

December 30th, 2007 at 11:21pm