@hugs.from.holly errmmm they were about to fuck but Xavier realize it was a bad idea... when it actually was a good one. i think my update will have them fucking xD
thank god you're both good writers. ooh, i love when it's like this: they both have feelings for each other, but neither will admit it. anyway, this chapter was nicely written and james seems like a douche.
story claim! nice start here. longer chapters would be nice. it'll get people into the story faster. other than that, i think it's perfect. i'm lookin' forward to how this plays out.
August 3rd, 2010 at 12:38pm
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