Little Black Sheep - Comments

This is one of the most thought out, amazing fanfiction I have ever read.
At first I was a little skeptical about starting at the very beginning (As in Book One); but the way you have written your stories, is almost One Hundred Percent Flawless.
I don't like the fact that I have to wait for them to grow up (Like I did with the actual Harry Potter Books) but because it is so well written, there is no reason to complain at all.

I hope you update soon, because I honestly can not wait to read more of it.

Yay, comment swap gave me an HP fic. So far I've only completed the first chapter. I really like it, it's a great story and I enjoy reading it! My only criticism would be that you're paragraphs need to have a space between them, following Mibba guidelines. It would make it much easier to read. Otherwise there were no mistakes. Glad I got to read this and can't wait to read more of it!

I was extremely happy that comment swap directed me to a Harry Potter fan fiction since I've read some amazing ones before. This however, was by far the best. Amazing detail, interesting plot that kept me wanting more, a beautiful layout... really I have no constructive criticism for you, there is absolutely nothing I didn't like about your story, thank you, you've made my day, haha!

I love Harry Potter and will jump at any chance to read its fan fictions. I always get so happy when Comment Swap directs me to one. Anyways, I geniunely enjoy this story line. And the detail is stunning. I have a feeling this will develop with all the books and I can't wait to read more. :)

I got so freakishly excited when I saw this given to me on comment swap. I happen to unhealthily LOVE Harry potter. and not often at all do you find a good, well-written Harry Potter fanfiction. BUT THIS ONE IS FABULOUS. ASDFGHJKL;
I agree with the person below me, it's like, flawless. so so so good. lil ol me is just about to hit that beautiful subscribe button.
pretty pretty please keep writing, you're creative and have a knack for writing beautifully. update often!!!
- Olivia <3

I love this. I really do. I'm glad comment swap sent me here.

Alright. Down to business.

I cant find any flaw in anything! Dialogue is pitch perfect, the story is so engaging and keeps you interested, and the layout is beautiful. I can't offer criticism because there isn't any to offer. I like what you did here, so good job and Congrats. You made some random reader very happy today. ^_^

Does Oliver like her? And if so can she give him a shot???

Please please please comment! I love this so much!

OMG! I wouldve expected there to be at least 6 pages of comments this stories so good! I absolutely love this and book one and have been subscribed for ages! Please please please update soon!

OMG!! YAAY:) Book Two!

Sorry It Took So Long For Me To Comment. :\ I Thought I Subscribed...But I Did NOW!!

AMAZING STORY!!! :DDDDD