Awkward Intentions - Comments

You know I do kinda grow sick of reading love story after love story on this site. Everyone has one and there's basically no plot besides these 2 people falling in love and being dreamy together. It's rather sickening. With that said, yours DOES stand out to me. I think it does because of the pure poetic view you took instead of just saying "he was dreamy." I like how you made the audience understand that without actually saying it. This one was different and I did enjoy it. Keep up the good work.

Let me start off with the fact that I loved the summary. That is the best definition of love I've ever come across!

I wasn't too keen on the layout at first, but it grew on me. The banner is really cute and gives off that romantic-flying free feeling that ties it all together. =)

The story is really touching. Many emotions raced through me at once. Your use of second point of view is wonderful, and very rare. I felt as though the character was me and I could see the scenes in my mind as if they were flashing before me.

You wrote the story very well, painting pictures so very clearly. Amazing job! <3

Amazing