You ma'am, are a genius. I absolutely love your story, it brings warmth to my heart. :D But no seriously. It's super duper duper good. Keep it up love (:
Wow amazing story it's so sad and yet some parts I can't help but smile. I hope they didn't do anything to serious with their experiments on her. I feel so bad and I hope Jimmy gets her out of there soon. I hope they all get out soon. That nurse better drop over dead too. lol You're an amazing writer.
Shit! I feel kind of connected to this story! I love the idea because you describe the place as one of those clinics are in real life. You made some research, didn't you? I love your writing style cause you know how to hook the reader with the plot. It is just amazing. What i also like is the way you choose your words, it is simple but at the same time it is appropiate. That means that you know your audience pretty god damn well. **Thumbs up**
I'm very happy that someone finally put the Berry's in their Avenged Sevenfold story, it makes me happy. I've only read one other story with them in it, :| But I love this story, it makes me smile, (x
Ew, Lacey. x] I love her but come on, Johnny loves me. Seriously (xx Poor, poor Nat </3 I'm going to start calling her that x] Eep, Brian is scared to be man handled x]
I loved it. I seriously hate the Berry's in this though. Poor Brian </3 I swear I commented on this for chapter 7 D: What the fuck, Mibba? Anways, I have a feeling that her fear is going to grow stronger </3