Omg. Partially because this story has some really hilarious moments and the fact that I read this at almost 3 am, I have officially laughed so hard that I started laughing crying o_o but it's awesome, and I love it and stuff ^-^
Ooh, I've finally found an actual good, and grammatically correct, Jimmy story, with a mature plot! I'm so happy, there aren't many out there. I'm about to read your others.
Okay, I should probably go to bed really soon so I'll make this quick. I read this entire story in one setting and I love it. The plot is good, it's well written and interesting, and you used FORESHADOWING!!! I'm done, lol. I subscribed, and update when you can. :D