Three Damn Words - Comments

  • Nia_Flores

    Nia_Flores (100)

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    You should try to explain somehow everything that she would feel & think at that point. Try to describe how anyone would react, like the chill & nervousness that someone would feel when a hot guy is looking at you. When you really connect with the character, it'll become easier. Try to think she is you & that Alex is the guy you've been dying for & never noticed you until now. That'll help a lot. I don't know, maybe I made no sense, but I like this story & the plot & how it can develop! Take care.
    August 11th, 2010 at 12:53am
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    You should def make it into a story. You have a nice story line to work with. Keep it up
    August 4th, 2010 at 10:10am