Second Chance - Comments

Your kidding me right?? Jfc I just wasted two days on this damn story and you end it like that?

So what happened to Zaky? I know his gf died but in chapter 22 it seems like there's more to it. Hopefully ill find out in the next few chapters.

Cute story so far but in their right mind would choose their fathers beatings rather a lil motion sickness?!?!! This chick is weird in the head!

Cute story so far but in their right mind would choose their fathers beatings rather a lil motion sickness?!?!! This chick is weird in the head!

First things first: I absolutely adore this. It got me so hooked I couldn't stop reading until the very last word.
I actually enjoyed how this wasn't a romance; it was a good change of settings, I guess. Although I do like romance, I believe that's what most fan fictions are about and I must confess that's one of the things that sometimes make me not want to read certain stories. So, thank you for that!
And because I believe in good criticism I'm going to tell you something that I hope will please you (since you seem so scared of your old work, yeah x'D). So, while the writing style in this story of yours is amazingly good - really, it's one of the best written stories I've ever read here - the truth is that the depth of the words and sentences don't compare to what I've read in Lost or White Rabbit. Maybe that's one of the things that made me so happy to have read this: seeing how your writing style evolved quite noticeably. You managed to grow your talent into something more... delicate to read, more intricate. And that's just amazing :D
As for the story itself, I'm not gonna lie; much like any reader (I believe) I would have liked to know what happened after that, how things turned out at least in a near future. But in perspective, I'm really glad you ended it the way you did. A seemingly incomplete ending gives the readers the freedom to finish the story in their mind as they please and, to me at least (but what do I know?) it sends a vibe of trust from writer to reader and I really like that.
I'm really glad I found you. There's something amazing about discovering new perfect writers, isn't it? :D
Thank you for writing this (':

P.s: I tried, I swear I really tried to imagine Larry as the bad guy.

1-27: let's see, first things first, I fucking loved this story so much that I didn't stop reading because I was too drawn into the story to want to stop. I actually started this about 11:44 and read the very last sentence of the last chapter at 1:34; it was that awesomely prue perfection. I really wish we could figure out what happened, like does she go back to school and have students try to win her over? Does she fall in love withsomeone whose just like zacky? And there are many a more questions like that, but I have a feeling this is the last we faithfully readers will see of Abbey Baker.

Loved this story it was entertaining and a good plot !!

I is sooo sad this one ended..it's amazing..but i've also been keepin up with Crash Into Me and it's easily one of my favorite stories on Mibba..keep up the good work:)

So, I decided to check out your other stories, and I LOVE this one! The writing, the detail, the everything was just phenomenal. You really are an amazing author. As soon as I started reading this, I was hooked. It took me about 2-3 hours give or take to read it, but I don't regret it, because it was amazing. <3

I really enjoyed reading this. :)

Just Read This
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This Is Amazing

hahahahahaha loved it! perfect ending!

Don't even know how I missed this, but it was an awesome read, no matter what you say. This deserves a lot more comments then it has and I wish I could comment one hundred times without being irritating, but it was a great story.

I hope you continue writing as you're a great author. Never give up!

<3

YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! HAHAHAHAHA!! BYEBYE LARRY!!!
God I'm so fucking glad he's gone but really?! Sending people to Zacky's house to kidnap her to make publicity over missing a tour?! Fucking douchebag he is.
I'm so glad they got rid of him and Zacky broke his nose lol He soooo deserved that haha :D
I loved Jimmy at the end "How's that for publicity?" That made my whole fucking day :P
I'm sad this is over :( This was one of my favourites stories :(

='( Nooo I don't want it to end, I love the story!!

I'm really sad to see this is over. I enjoyed reading it, and even though you might not think it was up to your expectations, I have to disagree. It was one of the best stories I've read on here, so don't kick yourself over nothing.
Like I said, I'm sorry it's over. I loved every word. :D

Woohoo! Larry's finally gone. :D
It was a great story, you should get an award or something. Seriously.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward for more chapters for your other story! :)

Ha ha ha. FUCK YOU LARRY!
And that's the end. Sigh, such a great story finished.
It makes me a little sad.
But like I said, it was great so yay!<3
If you ever plan to do a sequel by some chance, just drop me a comment or message. c:

I really love this story!

<3333 Up-date again soon! I'm dying to see what's going to happen next!!