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  • figwmwrtbb

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    WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON?!?! Well obviously the authorities have been told that Abby was kidnapped but seriously?! I totally think it's Larry trying to get rid of her and I hope Brian and her say something about what Larry had done to her.

    Dude I'm so pissed right now I'm literally shaking. And wanna punch something haha.

    Please update as soon as possible so I can figure out how I'm gonna kill the person saying she was kidnapped >:|
    June 29th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • mindblind

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    It's either Larry or her dad.
    I can't see why her father would go that far though, he doesn't like her at all.
    Either way I just hope she can stay with the guys.
    June 29th, 2011 at 04:20am
  • Agent Baby

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    really good.i love it.update soon
    June 29th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • KellShadows

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    Up-date again soon! Love the story, definitely one of my favorite's now. =) Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
    June 29th, 2011 at 02:15am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it
    June 27th, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • mindblind

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    I really hope she doesn't go back to Sydney.
    I mean, it'll be bad since that probably means Zacky still needs her,
    but you know, I think she's better off with them.
    They just need to fire Larry, ahaha.
    Can't wait for another update.
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • KellShadows

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    Love the story so far, I hope you up-date again soon! =)
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:49am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    I'm glad she feels accepted but she is not gonna go back to Sydney is she? I don't wanna her to go back :( Is Brian gonna talk to Abbey soon? And I'm still anxious to see the others reactions to what Larry was doing :/ Can't wait for more :D
    June 27th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • ZacksGurl2015

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    Through this whole story i felt like I was there beside her and i could feel everything she felt......but i know for a fact that i wanted to punch that one girl that taunted her and Larry.......GO BRIAN AND ZACKY <3
    June 26th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • mindblind

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    Okay, Larry's punk ass needs to get fired.
    He's just so...ugh!
    I hope Matt and/or Brian and/or Jimmy kills him. Grr.
    Either way, still loving the story and can't wait for more!
    June 25th, 2011 at 08:40am
  • xmydecemberx

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    Larry crossed the line when he hit her and I am so glad that Brian was there to save her and all :). And Bri is right. The topic is far from being over. Beautiful :).
    June 24th, 2011 at 08:08pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    FINALLY!!! I'm glad someone saw what that ass was doing. And I'm kinda scared about what the rest of the guys are gonna do when they find out what Larry has done :/
    Can't wait for more :)
    June 24th, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • mistery gurl

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    im so glad brian stuck up for her. i almost expected him to agree with the manager. zacks gonna flip his lid, i wouldnt be surprized if she had a red hand on her face....
    June 24th, 2011 at 11:29am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it, but i thought she had a bruised shoulder so wouldnt someone notice it if she was wearing a dress?
    June 23rd, 2011 at 10:17am
  • figwmwrtbb

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    If only I could see the guys dressed up like that *dies* I've always wanted to go to London. I can't wait for the next update and I really hope that someone finds out that Larry is being a douche to her >.<

    Random Fact: I'm running out of facts :/
    June 22nd, 2011 at 06:35pm
  • mindblind

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    I don't care what you say, I enjoyed this chapter.
    Now if I could see the guys dressed like that in real life I could die happy.
    Can't wait for more of you lovely story<3
    June 22nd, 2011 at 05:24pm
  • mistery gurl

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    loved the chapter :) im glad jimmy was nice. but i thought he would have picked up on her wincing when he squeezed her shoulder. if he did, i hope he asks zacky and gets to the bottom of it. is it weird that i could see her confiding in johnny??? i mostly read fan fiction. its like orignal,but it just has a famour person in it. i like fan fiction better than orignal though, i like your story because its different, and i like your style :)
    May 29th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • dawn8279

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    I like both fan-fic and original fiction I really like this story b/c jimmy is in it and I also like anythin a7x
    May 29th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • RachelRose523

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    I like to read both, though on original it just depends on how it is written. I do though read fanfiction more.
    May 29th, 2011 at 12:25am
  • Shamma

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    I have read a few original fictions, but I always will and do prefer fanfiction.
    I enjoy fanfiction more.
    Hope my opinion has helped you.
    May 28th, 2011 at 09:25pm