July 21st, 2011 at 04:14am
Lips of Deceit - Comments
-
-
Even though it was hard to write i am happy that you did it any way i love this story and can't wait for the next update/June 20th, 2011 at 07:13am
-
I think this might be one of the best ideas for an Avenged Sevenfold fanfiction I've read. God damn.June 20th, 2011 at 03:54am
-
oo this is getting sooo good!
i wonder who it was that she saw at the end...Kevin perhaps?
awesome update! =)January 26th, 2011 at 10:39pm -
THIS IS REALLY GOODJanuary 19th, 2011 at 05:59am
-
i'm excited! a really original plot for once! KEEP IT UP!December 4th, 2010 at 07:22pm
-
That
Was
AWESOME!!!!!
You should write more!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!December 2nd, 2010 at 02:25am -
Ahhhhh...nooo..update soon...this story is so fucking amazing..plz update soon...!!!December 1st, 2010 at 01:14am
-
Loved it. Missed it. <3December 1st, 2010 at 12:32am
-
haha Gerard and Tara crack me up
i can see those two getting together =)
i wonder how well things will go for Jay
in Bat Country i have a feeling she might
cause some issues between the guys lol
awesome update! =)November 30th, 2010 at 11:35pm -
This was amazing please update soon.November 26th, 2010 at 06:06am
-
You, Miss Ma'am, are a genius!!!! No one else could come up with something as amazing as this. My face was nearly pressed to the screen as I read, and I'll admit that I squealed just a little when she shot herself. That's the way to do it!! Die on your own terms, not theirs. I can't wait for more!September 11th, 2010 at 01:29am
-
omfg yes..... oh yes baby yes.... i think i will be saying something like that when my email tells me there is a story update for my new favourite subscriptionSeptember 9th, 2010 at 01:05pm
-
:O MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU PUT MORE I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER BUT I'M NOT LEZ I PROMISE YOU!!!!!!!!! I'LL LOVE YOU LIKE A SISTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M DESPERATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll give you a cookie!September 9th, 2010 at 05:41am
-
ummm....epic. I definitely think it's time for another update....haha
<3September 9th, 2010 at 05:04am -
LOVE LOVE LOVE! I am so excited for this!September 9th, 2010 at 04:35am
-
:D I was About to write 'wow I really love that name, Riley. Were did you get it?' Then I smacked myself and remembered it was me. I loved the goverent kick ass chapter. REBEL! KICK ASS! HIGH HEELS!
More soon!!!September 9th, 2010 at 01:58am -
That was probably the best thing I've ever read, totally unexpected and I really can't wait for an update!September 9th, 2010 at 01:22am
-
holy shit i cant believe she shot herself!!!
i really was not expecting that at all
i cant wait to see what else happens! =)
awesome update! =)September 8th, 2010 at 06:35am -
OMGEE!!!! this is a-freakin-mazing!!! write more NAO!September 7th, 2010 at 12:52am
I read this story from the beginning, even though I've already read the first couple of chapters. Damn, hun, I can't get over just how amazing this story is. We both know that I've read a lot of stories, but I have never read one like yours. Never. I know writing Jasey's back story had to be very hard for you, but I'm glad you got through it. Writing is one of the best forms of therapy...
By the way, is it wrong that I love my own character? And Gee? lol. Anywho, I can't wait to see what happens when Jasey actually makes it into the city! I'm sure it'll be epic :)