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  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I just.. this story is amazing. I can't hardly find one single flaw about it. Everything just seems to be so perfect. And just.. it made me smile almost through out the whole time. I like how Matt had to realize and think for a second about what he wanted.

    I especially love the beach moment and practically everything between Matt and Kylie. Their relationship is just.. amazing. I can't really think of good enough words to describe it. And yeah, I'm glad they're finally gonna get married!

    :D
    June 13th, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • Sue Saloio

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    Hey...:)
    I just found this story! I couldn't help but read it all! FUCKING AWESOME! (sorry about the caps, but I really loved it! <3
    November 11th, 2011 at 02:16pm
  • little-miss-strange

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    ASDFLKLKJDFLSF! That was fucking amazing!
    For starters, it wasn't even that short! Lol, based on what you were saying on AIM, I was thinking it was gonna be like a paragraph or something, but that's totally not the case. In fact, I thought you summed things up quite nicely, with a good amount of detail, but not too overwhelming. Actually, I tend to like endings like this. That are sort of short and sweet, ya know?
    And obviously, I fucking LOVE the fact that you ended with Matt and Kylie's wedding. Seriously, doll, that shit made me smile like a fucking idiot.
    And of course, I thought the quote at the end was perfect.
    Basically, like I was saying before, I thought the whole thing was fucking awesome & also very well-written. You did an incredible job on this story, dear! :)<3
    July 21st, 2011 at 04:52am
  • little-miss-strange

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    OMFG! THAT WAS SO FUCKING CUTE!
    Seriously, dude, that was one of the sweetest, most awesomest things I've ever read. I mean, can you imagine how incredible it would be to have Matt fucking Sanders singing such a heartfelt song to you? Christ, that would be amazing. And I'd say Warmness on the Soul is the fucking perfect song to sum up Matt and Kylie's relationship. They've definitely been through some hard times, but it's undeniable that they're madly in love with each other.
    And I'm sooooo fucking happy they're getting married! Seriously, it's about fucking time.
    LOL, but yeah, man, it was fucking brilliant. And as always, very wonderfully written.
    I can't fucking wait 'til you post more! <3
    January 20th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • choirgirlx3

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    awesome update! =)
    January 9th, 2011 at 04:23am
  • SynysterNightmare

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    Loved it and I'm so happy that they're getting married :)
    January 9th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awwww
    Wedding!!!! <3
    January 9th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • little-miss-strange

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    OMG! That made me want to cry like a fucking baby!
    But in a good way, of course. I mean, that moment between Matt & Kylie was just... wow! So fucking perfect. Starting with Matt taking her to their spot near the beach, to all those fucking incredible things he said to her. It was all so heartfelt and beautiful, and it makes me happy, cuz after all the Hell they've been through together, they deserve some fucking happiness. I mean, we all love the drama and shit, but in the end, I think we just want to see them together at last.
    So yeah, man, it was fucking amazing! & I seriously can't wait 'til you update again! <3
    January 6th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • choirgirlx3

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    WOW!!!!! i love it update again soon PLEASE!!!!!
    January 5th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved the update!
    glad theyre happy :)
    January 4th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • SynysterNightmare

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    Well I'm glad that Matt and Kylie made up:) I love this story and I can't wait for more :))
    January 4th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Loving the story!! Cant wait to read more awesomeness chapters!!!
    January 1st, 2011 at 12:43am
  • violetriddle

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    beep....beep....beep....beep....beep....beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee--------------------------------------------------------------------------....................................................................................
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:04pm
  • little-miss-strange

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    That was a fucking awesome update, dear!
    And I'm gonna have to agree with Brian. Personally, I think BOTH Matt & Kylie were acting quite pig-headed, but Matt has to push all of that aside and balls up... or else he's gonna lose Kylie, which he obviously doesn't want to hapepen. When you love someone a lot, there's just no point in dwelling on the past, ya know?
    But yeah, like I was saying, I think Brian is absolutely fucking correct & I hope Matt gets the hint.
    As much as I love drama, I'd really like to see Matt and Kylie happy again!
    Also, I'd like to see another update as soon as you fucking can. :D
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:56am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awww!
    I loved it!
    More soon please!!
    December 31st, 2010 at 05:37am
  • SynysterNightmare

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    Matts actually gonna apologize. Finally! Can't wait to see if she forgives him. Loved it.
    December 30th, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • little-miss-strange

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    Aw, that made me want to cry! Poor Brian. :[
    I mean, I'm glad he's okay, but he's obviously in a shit ton of pain and this is obviously really hard on everyone, especially Zooey. Like you were saying, it's got to be incredibly difficult to see someone you love in so much pain and no that you can't do anything about it.
    It's really sweet, though, cuz you can see how much Brian and Zooey love each other.
    And of course, you can see how much Matt loves Kylie even after everything that's happened between them. They've had such a troubled relationship that you'd think it'd be hard for them to hold on to those feelings, but love isn't something that can be broken so easily.
    And Matt kissing her at the end. Oooh, I got goosebumps!
    I just hope Kylie hears him out and listens to her heart. I want to see her and Matt back together!
    Also, I'd really love to see another update, but no pressure or anything cuz you've got about a bazillion stories going right now. LOL, but get the point. More as soon as you can!
    December 5th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    amazing update cant wait to read more =]
    December 5th, 2010 at 08:53pm
  • violetriddle

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    :O
    NAUGHTY LANGUAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hahaha
    That means that I get to use naughty language
    I fucking love you too
    December 4th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I'm so glad that Brian is ok!!
    More soon please!!
    December 3rd, 2010 at 07:31am