I Waited For You - Comments

O_o;
Weird.
Mark wasn't who I was thinking about at all as I wrote it.. [x
Amd. D": That makes me sad that you couldn't read the layout.
Wait. That sentence doesn't make sense to me either... Time to go re-read. Rofl.

I couldn't read the layout... ;[

And, this part didn't make sense to me.. "and the piece of grass that she had waited for the last time for him"
O.o >.>

Good story, though. ♥
I'm not really sure how I feel about the ending...but, yeah.

For some reason, it made me think of you and Mark and Nicole. O.o...

Awe. That was cute.
The ending was nice, how she could finally break away from him.
The flashbacks gave me insight to the character.
I liked how at the end, she found herself not caring anymore.
She found that he was never worth it.
Great job.

This is cute so far. I'll give you the full comment once the story is completed. Let me know when.

Love, this is, well I don't know how to describe it.
I actually like the way she had blind faith in him in the beginning, and seeing the way she's losing that faith is..sad. I feel for her, I really do.

Awe;
Thank you, you guys.
It's not done yet, and it's gonna be a oneshot when I'm done [;<
But, yea, thanks for the encouragement<3

Awsome! I love it :D

this sounds really good. well, at least the first chapter :). keep writing!