Victim - Comments

This was beautiful[:
Has to be the best Jimmy story i've read on here, it fit the song so well and the detail was amazing. I almost felt like the main character, having to go through all the pain of losing someone you love. It fit the song so very well. I really really enjoyed this, you did an amazing amazing job.<3

Woah. Woah woah woah. The banner is excellent. The story is just amazing, even if I'm not a huge A7X fan, it was still beautifully written.

But the blue, I think you should change it because it really does hurt. It burns! xD But I love everything else, I ADORE everything else. I don't know, I just find this story really good.

Amazing job!

I agree with losing control. about the layout. The blue really hurts my eyes and I don't think it matches well with the story. However, this story is really touching. I'm not a fan of Avenged Sevenfold at all, but still, I enjoyed it (:
Great job!

That was absolutely fucking beautiful.
It was somber, yet there was a note of hope to it, because it makes you realize that, in a way, Jimmy must be very happy being where he is now.
It's been hard for all of us cuz we feel like he's left us behind, but the main thing to remember is that he's still here as long as we hold on to his memory, and that his spirit will stay with us forever.
Plus, he's not suffering anymore and probably enjoys getting to see the extent of how much he's always meant to us, even if it's sometimes hard to understand why we have to lose our loved ones.
IDK, it was just so sweet and touching. It actually made me cry, but I think it was a good thing.
Kinda makes you think that it's okay to let it out every once it a while, you know?
And did I mention that it was very well written? Cuz it was!
My favorite thing was the raw emotion, and how it seems that this could speak to anyone that's ever lost someone that they loved and cared about.
10/10 for being one of the most touching stories I've read in a while!

I really liked how you used more then just the title of the song in your story. It worked very well. You've received 129 points, great job!

I forgot to add that I liked the way you did it as a thingy for Jimmy.

I'm not too keen on this, I don't like the layout or the story itself, mainly cos it's fan fic.
You didn't write it really well but you wrote it well enough, I guess.
Good effort./font]

It fits the song so well and I actually enjoyed the story...though the bottom picture kinda scared me XD

I love the way you incoporate the lyrics into the story and stilled made it flow beautifully. As well, I love how you don't just make her give up on life as many do. Like I always say: If you truely love someone, you'll live for them. THanks for entering!

First of all, the layout really kind of hurt my eyes. I would suggest using less bright colors, and colors that don't contrast quite as much.

But the story was just so touching. I'm not even a huge fan of Avenged Sevenfold, but this had my heart swelling. I think you captured the emotions that all of the fans and friends felt with his passing.

It was a really sweet story.

I didn't realy like the layout. The blue hurt my eyes. >.>
Anyways.
This was very well written. It was really sad and just about made me cry, but I liked it.
Good job (:

I like the layout, but notthe bottom picture. It just kind of doesn't seem right there.
The story was deep. I loved it. It made me cry. Very well written.

The title fit perfectly.
The banner was amazing. I felt like the bottom picture was just random though.

When I was first reading, I thought you should add a memory or have someone tell a memory. After reading, I'm glad you didn't. This was very well written and one of the best A7X one-shots I've read so far. I also think you ended it well. Great job. :)

You have a way with words. I hope to be as good as you someday. Maybe you could share your tips? Lol, you don't have to. I love this. Your an amazing writer from what I can tell.

This was amazing :)
I really like the concept, and it was very well written