Deadly - Comments

it my leaving quizlla thingy ad stuff in i needed pople totake is and u dont have a comment hingy on ur profile so i just posted it on here

im pretty sure this story is going to turn out to be amazing, but i have a feeling that since there are so many characters p.o.v. it is going to get really complicated. Im not sure what's going to come, but it seems as if there are going to be like a couple of stories being told at the same time. if that is the case, you might want to consider breaking it up into different stories so it doesn't get too complicated and so that every characters perspective relates to what is at hand.

Usually i hate stories with more than two main charecters.
However this story pulls it off.
It is such an odd idea, but i absolutely adore it!

Awh, I like Hope.
He's so happy and optimistic :)
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Love the concept and idea.
The layout is kind of hard on the eyes, the big contrast between black and white.
Can't wait for the next update.

Ehhh third comment in a row? Not good xD

But I have to say: Hope is adorable(:
A different adorable from Pride xD

He's...the kind of adorable that makes a person seem like they can never do any wrong; it's impossible not to like them.

And I think Vanity has grown to be my second-favorite sin xD

If I actually knew him in real life...he'd be a person that'd severely piss me off.

But in this story? He amuses me xD I think one of my favorite quotes from his chapter is "an ass like this deserves to be put on display!" rofl. And I think he's adorable, physically and personality-wise .

1. which sin is your favorite? Easy, Ivy/Envy.
2. why? I dunno, I guess it's because I can relate to him the most. I'm an envious little bugger.
3. any predictions? Other than what we've been told already? xD Not really. Except everyone will remain relatively the same except Ryder may be slightly less angry and Sloth might be less apathetic.

Ohh, and promise me that Hope doesn't turn out to be a total Mary Sue D:

And guess what? I took a 'which sin drives you?' quiz on Facebook...I got pride xD
I am pretty self-centered...I just try not to show it xD
But I thought I'd turn out to be sloth or envy O.o

I feel like Sloth right now -.-
I feel like taking a nap.

1. which sin is your favorite? Sebby
2. why? Cuz he's fantabulous, and he is lust, which the teenage population couldnt live without. and he is just amazing like that. I don't really like him because he keeps hurting Ivy. :(
3. any predictions? Nope, cuz i suck like that.

1. which sin is your favorite? - Vanity ;)
2. why? - because he loves himself so much that it's just amazing. I think it's so much fun to read from his pov and know what he's thinking.
3. any predictions? - Noope. I suck at predicting for stories XD

Awh, poor Rogue :(
And oblivious, oblivious Nevaeh.
He doesn't even know how Rogue feels about him :(
This makes me sad.
Lovely update
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i love ryder and rogue.

I love that you named Sloth "Rogue". My name in real life is Rogue. It made me laugh, haha. :D

heheh,
I love Navaeh. He's so cute
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I love this. So much. I don't really know how you guys will make it work with EIGHT authors, but I'm sure you'll pull it off. I love Nevaeh. I think he's my favorite. But him & Victor together are freaking adorable. Rogue annoys me a little bit, but he's pretty cool. Ryder...is awesome. Ivy and Sebastian are kind of annoying but I love them too, lol. Vanity is pretty awesome too. Ahhhh I want to meet Hope. ALOT.

I still love Nevaeh. XDD Update soon

Hahah I'm totally commenting on my own story just to tell BVB. that I LOVE YOU TOO. :D
And that you make me love Nevaeh even more than I already did. :3

I like Ryder & Ivy. I did like Rogue until I found out he's trying to get with Nevaeh D8

I think my favorites are Nevaeh and Ivy :D

Vanity makes me facepalm xD

Oh, and I forgot to mention-

I'm drawing fanart :D
Like, a full-body group sketch of everyone, some sitting, some standing, etc etc.
I'll try to get it out soon xD
I started on it yesterday but then I was like, "Nah, fuck this." *draws random scene girl* xD
I usually draw girls, so yea xD but-but Sebastian and Vanity look close enough to girls, anyway . Just more proof that girls are the more attractive race.Kate Perry was right! .

Woo, yay for random, non-related ranting! :D
I can't wait for Sloth's chapter(:
And Hope's! :D

I wonder how Hope will change them

Im in love with this. I really am. I would LOVE To make a banner:} I also noticed your lacking vanity in your banner. I believe. Yea, This story is amazing :}

loved it! xD update soon :)