O.O WE need to talk about this Chapter. Seriously... I'm loving this so far and You should have seen my grin when i read the final sentence, it was like, from ear to ear and my eyes went like -----> O.O V Awesome job, as always...
Wow, this keeps surprising me Fred... everything perfectly matches. I liked this chapter a lot, I had a smile on my face and tears on my eyes while reading it. Humm... Sneaking through Characters Section: "She is only about 5'2, and is very self insecure about her body, barely ever showing it off. She usually doesn't do her hair at all, just during special occasions." Reminds me about a certain somebody.... Well, keep on doing this awesome job because this actually takes me to the past when reading it. XoXo Soda
Wow.. such an awesome and emotionfilled chapter, I really liked it even though it was sad that she lost her parents :( I'm really excited about the next chapter now too! Update soon, yes? : D