Lock It Away - Comments

This was really great – your concept is wonderful, I was worried a bit when the locket came up that it would be her ex-boyfriend or something but having it be a picture of her dead sister seemed a lot more meaningful to me. The descriptions and imagery were fantastic, I could picture it perfectly and it all flowed so nice and smoothly. I like the banner and the colors in the layout but having so much padding at the top and then non at the bottom looked a little off to me. Other than that this was wonderful, great job.

Wow, that was written really powerfully. It had a nice slow escalation to the point where it's finally opened. I love how it doesn't reveal the content until the end too. The suspense was nice. The whole entry was great. I liked it. Well done, thanks.