Coiffure - Comments

This still makes me laugh. :D

Dude, this was amazing amazing amazingggg!

And yet really hilarious at the same time! xD

I think that only you could pull something like this off - with it still being extremely well-written.

Your descriptions were amazing, as always.
I felt that the dialogue was great as well, especially because I can see you've used a bit more of it than usual.
Your way with words always just astounds me so much. The pictures and imagery I manage to percieve from the words you write is incredible.

You, my dear, are brilliant. I loved this because of the pedo-van.
But I loved it even more because of the pedo-stache.

<3

THE BEST PART IS THAT I'M BELLA AND JASPER'S MINE! :D

I must say, I thought your descriptions were amazing.
You wrote this very well, and a Jackson Rathbone fan-fic?
Quite unique. I think you did a very good job, bravo :)

And even though this is a one-shot, I'm still subscribing because I really enjoyed this.

Oh and my favorite part was at the end, "“Well” whispered Jasper, “let me show you to my pedo van”. Bella’s mouth dropped, as she was hauled by Jasper into her dream van." tehe.

You're just so eloquent. Its not even fair, your description has description its so good.
a rabid tribe of preps, their manicures sharpened, and war paint splattered over a luscious demeanour I laughed out loud at this, then realised GABZ [w/caps] had commented on it. Are you serious, really?! :sniff:

You're too good. I'm going to turn into a perfume-esque serial killer and kill you for your skillz. Heck that could just be Sylar from heroes, too. Who cares, either way its happening *jafar laugh* /Aladdin reference.

I hate you. So, so much,
>.<
YOU'RE TOO GOOD AT WRITING.

Bella was trapped amongst a rabid tribe of preps, their manicures sharpened, and war paint splattered over a luscious demeanour.
LOLOLOL, preps.

The moss or his iris dashingly infused with a trickle of chocolate
That, that is what I'm talking about. Your descriptions are so pretty.
And should it be of?

I got a little confused here and there, but I got there. With all the descriptions it's kind of hard not to get lost every once in a while. But don't worry, this meese killer was ableto understand.

You write so eloquently with all these fantastic descriptions and it's just like "STOP HAVING TALENT."

lmfao, dream van. This is definitely a win.
:D

I loved this! It's so adorable and so different. I loved the ending, it made me laugh a lot. xD
As usual, your descriptive writing blows me away, how can you be so talented? It's rather frustrating actually, I'd love to be able to paint out a scene like you! You're descriptions just make everything seem that much more beautiful and the story just thrives with each word you write.
I love this, as usual :)

IT'S A GOOD MISTAKE!
No but seriously. It fits with his styyyle! :D

^. Psht, he obviously likes to pretent to be his characters outside of work xD
I'd never make a mistake like that. Honest ::shifty eyes:

Just one question, why does he introduce himself as Jackson first, and then he's Jasper? :O
IS HE BOTH?! OH THAT WOULD BE SO DAMN HAWT!

flöjkslgjsdlöfkslöjfks OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!
ANY INTELLIGENT COMMENTS ESCAPE ME.
CAPS IS NECESSARY.

YOU BLEW ME AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love, love, love it! :D

So fucking amaaaazing! OMFG Jackson pulled me into his pedo-van YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! <3
And there we sexed a lot, obviously.

Seriously, OMFG I LOVE YOU FOR THIS IT WAS SO FUCKING BRILLIANT YOU ARE BOSS!
LOVE IT! <3
<3

And you! :D <3