December 19th, 2010 at 06:40pm
Smiling at Everything - Comments
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SHE FINALLY OPENED UP TO THEM!!!! YAY!!! HAPPINESS FOR ALL!!!December 1st, 2010 at 03:14am
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I'm so sad that it's over. But it was great nonetheless.November 30th, 2010 at 11:53pm
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Make me sad to see this story go so soon, but I'm psyched about the next one!November 30th, 2010 at 11:27pm
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i'm like death;y sick with the flu since last night
and i love that you posted
because it made my life a tad happier.
i'm so sad this is over. because this was probably my favorite one so far. probably because the characters are so much more developed. but its sad to see it end. i'm just so excited for the new one =]November 30th, 2010 at 10:17pm -
:) This is my favorite one so far! But, Zack is my favorite so... I can't wait for the next one~~!November 30th, 2010 at 09:08pm
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love the ending :)November 30th, 2010 at 07:36pm
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I loved this story so much!
I am so sad to see it go but I'm excited for the new one!
I hope you add in bits about Jazz and Zack though, so we get to see it she's recovering.
Going to subscribe to the new one right now:)November 30th, 2010 at 07:19pm -
I was going to be so annoyed if they were mad at her,
although, I really didn't think they would be. Great update,
it wasn't terrible at all.November 30th, 2010 at 01:11am -
so they're not mad. Good. I was going to call them all bitches.November 30th, 2010 at 12:44am
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I love this :)
I really liked how they all followed them to whichever table she picked.November 29th, 2010 at 10:58pm -
yessssssssssssssssssssssssss :)
they dont hate her :D
i love this story so much!!
and how you're updating so fast!! :D :D :D xxNovember 29th, 2010 at 09:24pm -
I liked this one, even though you think it "kind of sucked". It shows the progression the group is making towards understanding her problems.November 29th, 2010 at 06:44pm
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well i don't think this sucks at all.
Jazz and Zack had their first kiss.
and Alex is trying to help.
And everyone ended up sitting with Jazz =]November 29th, 2010 at 04:10pm -
Phewwww! I'm glad her band members aren't still mad at her...I was really worried!
And Jazz kissed Zack:)
More soon please:)November 29th, 2010 at 04:01pm -
love the update :DNovember 29th, 2010 at 03:59pm
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"Anything for you, Elvis," Zack said, "Anything for you."
OMG, that line. So emotional and sad! I hope that the rest of the band comes to their senses and realizes that they just need to be there for her!November 29th, 2010 at 06:00am -
That was probably the worst possible way for them to find out.
(Also, you are an amazing writer. Its not like it's detached. That last chapter made me cry.)November 29th, 2010 at 04:12am -
How could they do that to her? I get that they're mad that she didn't
tell them, but she didn't have to. It wasn't an obligation. She's already
unstable, instead of being mad about her not saying anything, they
should have thought why she didn't/
Love the update C:November 29th, 2010 at 12:20am -
The just left? Wow, I mean I get that they're upset and shocked.
But they must understand that Jazz has reasons for her actions.
Plus, she's in a fragile state already. I can't imagine how she felt when her friends left the room.
Great story, though :pNovember 28th, 2010 at 11:04pm
this was quite literally my favourite story and they never sent me the emails about it being updated D: i thought about it today and then realised its finished. :')
i think you've done an amazing job of this, not just cause the story is one of the most saddest, heart-breaking and cutest things ive ever read it is raising awareness of those charities.
i love it, its beautiful.