You Blew Your Chance - Comments

  • TwistedNaul;

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    I can't wait for this!
    This story sounds amazing.
    We do you plan on starting it??
    August 20th, 2010 at 01:23am
  • cuuriious

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    one word ... LOVE !
    more soon ? =)
    August 19th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • danii.

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    Ooooh I am very keen to read this!
    August 18th, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • natorrie14

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    i like it already! this is gonna be good
    cant wait 4 the rest!
    August 18th, 2010 at 10:18am
  • pennycausesdread

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    Ahh man thats the one thing chicks dread to hear.
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:37am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    this is gonna be good, can't wait!
    August 16th, 2010 at 10:36am
  • Shadow's Gates

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    hell yes i'm going to comment. you just got my attention!!!!
    August 16th, 2010 at 03:30am
  • ladyofsorrows101

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    I really want to know what's going to happen...
    I'm hooked! Can't wait for the rest, update soon!!!
    August 16th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Omg I am so psyched for this story! The prologue sounds amazing, and I seriously just can't wait for more! You never disappoint me haha. More soon, please my dearest?
    August 16th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • unique33

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    Brian was an asshole!
    I just want to punch him and wipe that stupid, smirk off his face. I hate girls like' Jenny.' I wanna punch her to.
    He's probably gonna regret saying that, when he sees her again.
    August 16th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • better.than.sex

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    Brian you asshole!!! ughh. i wanna punch him in the face! lol
    great first chapter. can't wait to see where it goes :D more
    soon?
    August 15th, 2010 at 08:34pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    great first chapter
    Brian is an ass though =/
    when she grows up i hope she gets a knock out body and proves him wrong
    <3 Michele
    August 15th, 2010 at 03:55pm
  • fightingthewolf

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    I love this story already!! Keep going please I'm syked to see how this is gonna go.

    Creech
    August 15th, 2010 at 01:40pm
  • headrushxreeta

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    definitely down to see how this is going to go. first chapter has me verrrrry intrigued, especially since most people don't write about girls with chubs. nothin' wrong with it though. excited!
    August 15th, 2010 at 10:48am
  • nessajc

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    Jerk face!!! But oh he will eat his words.

    Super harsh, but she's getting the last laugh when he sees the new her. tehe

    Although I have a feeling that maybe he would have grown up by the second meeting in which he's eating his words. hehe

    Psyched to find out what is going to happen next.
    August 15th, 2010 at 10:11am
  • PeanutFoREVer.

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    I loved it so far and the way he was all like 'cause I don't date fat people' was harsh and straight forward. It's great don't take too long to update or I'll send my dinosaur after you...
    August 15th, 2010 at 08:46am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    I like what you have so far. I think all girls don't ever want to go through that. I can't wait to see where you plan to take the story, plot wise. Keep up the great work and i'll be looking forward to the next update =)
    August 15th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Brian was such a jerk in high school!
    Can't wait to see what's gonna happen! :)
    August 15th, 2010 at 08:04am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    poor Alessandra =(

    damn could Brian be anymore rude and mean?
    watch when it comes back to bite him in the ass
    ill get a real kick out of that lol

    cant wait to see what happens next! =)
    August 15th, 2010 at 07:56am
  • Ylime13

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    Drammaa...
    This sounds gooood..
    Brians a dick, I'm betting that she gets hot and breaks his little douchey heart.
    Heheheh. Update soon por favor(:
    August 15th, 2010 at 07:52am