Pirates! - Comments

I love the idea and the plot, I really do. It's original and different. Just, there is some grammar mistakes and typos, but nothing to worry about too much.
Keep going.

I loved the update, I like how you write Jimmy's character because hes just so sweet, but at the same time I don't think you'd want to piss him off. Also it was great to see more of Syn, because so far its just mainly been her, The Rev and Shadows. But it's still brilliant.
Cant wait for more
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I'm interested to see where this is going. In the last chapter though, the word is submit not submiss.

Keep it! Jesus christ I fucking love this story to death I'm not kidding! I mean firstly its a pirate story and you cant go wrong with a pirate story. Secondly its Avenged Sevenfold...Once again, you cant go wrong with them. You've combined two great ideas along with her being blind and made a fantastic start to this story so please don't delete it! Its truly amazing!
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