This made me feel so sad because I've always wanted to go to a rock concert but I never had the chance. I love how easy to read and understand this is. It's not complicated or confusing or overly detail. It just is. It was easy for me to imagine the excitement someone must feel.
I could feel sweat and spit from the band members running around and singing. Gotta love that line (:
This was beautiful and wonderfully written. You can really realte to it, especially if you've been to a rock concert or two. Good job with writing this and relating to your readers. :)
This was completely easy to relate to. I love rock concert's, too, so much excitement. I think you did a very nice job portraying the excitement in the short word limit. :]
I seriously got the shiveries when I read this. Rock concerts make me a tad too stoked. I love the moshing, the screaming fans, the excitement. This was an awesome drabble. :)
Felt like I was there. I love the way you explained it like this:
I could feel sweat and spit from the band members running around and singing. I love the way you just explained it all right there. To me that was the center point of the whole drabble.
I like rock concerts. I feel there could have been a bit more to this, but it is a drabble, so that's sort of the point, right? Anyway. It made me want more, and I think you did a great job doing this.
I love the horns description, by the way. Took me a while, but I totally got it. (x
it feels like nothing could ruin that moment. it's pretty awesome to be able to connect to complete strangers in one crowded room because you all know that the performers on stage is what you all have in common. haha. anyway, i liked this, it had a nice flow. it was short and sweet. there could be more added to it and such, but I like how you kept it. :]