your the best . i love you . her favorite color is PURPLE !!! i love you . your my best friend . im gonna find you one day and hug you so tightly that you will EXPLODE !!!
Okay, so i just finished reading the latest chapter and I have to say that it is pretty good, but, the chapters are a bit short and there are a few grammatical errors here and there. All in all, it's still a good story. I am subscribing.
I hope I didn't offend you. I'm just trying to give constructive criticism.
Matt- like a player but not as player-y as Nate. Nicer to Ellie :) Ellie- attitude-y (hehe) but can be nice when she wants to be. good liar and I imagine her with chocolate brown hair and light green/blue eyes
okay ill put what i think of the characters in one word each . nate : player <---- lol . well he is !!!!! ellie : self-concious or however you spell it ????